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Re: You
Hey TheThing, That was a nice poem. I felt it summed up your feelings quite well, although it didn't quite make me as a reader feel it too, which is ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Helpless
Hi, I'm going to throw out my opinion, and you can do what you will with them. I hope they come across as constructively as they are intended, if not, ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Arcanum
Wow. Good work in putting a story behind the Major Arcana! :D You did well. Do you have your own deck? The only thing I'm going to make real mention ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Hell hath no furey like a women undead.
Hey EmmaJ, First of all, I'd like to say I loved your story - it kept me trapped inside of it all the way through. Points for the bitch-fight too, ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: If You Want Me
Wow. Beautiful. Stunning. You really captured the intensity of the emotion this person has for their love. The formation, the way it flows together from start to finish. I don't ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Orange pants and a trip to Paris
Interesting. I'm laughing actually. It had quite a twist that I was not expecting... Aliens? Anyway, good job. It ended quite abruptly, I must say, which was a bit of ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: leave me
I like this because it is simple and straight to the point. Just something I've always liked in everything. You portray a lot of emotion in it, which allows the ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Freestyle. Origional. Mine Only.
I also must make mention of your selfishness in not reviewing other peoples work, which they have spent much time and effort in creating. With all that aside, for what ...
Mar 13, 2009
